descriptive essay

 

 

 

 

 

Out line: MY FAVOURITE SIGHT SEEING

• Thesis statement: I love the beach which is the great place for me relaxing the stressful and fulfills the feeling.
• Body paragraph: 

* Paragraph 1:

-         Topic sentence: The first thing I usually do when come here is strolling.

-         Supporting: when strolling:

§  My ground feet touch the smooth white sand which gleams under the thin rays of the sun.

§  The fresh air make me feel more comfortable

§  I can sitting on the beach to listen to the sound of the wave

§  Enjoy the cool breeze

-         Concluding: It can clear my mind and help me throw out of every problem when I feel unhappy

* Paragraph 2:

-         Topic sentence: The picture of sun shine through every line of sea pine also is amazing one.

-         Supporting :

§  Sea pines are planted line by line

§  They're standing upright as straight as they could

* Paragraph 3:

-         Topic sentence: A change from sunset to night is very excited.

-         Supporting:

§  The sun is almost disappearing behind the horizon.

§  Color of the sky changing a little from blue to yellow and then become red.

§  Wanted to see the next sight after sunset: the night sky.

§  I see the dots of star beginning to appear.

§  The bright reflection from the star to a face of sea is a marvelous bright.

§  Hard to move my eyes from that sight

 * Conclusion:  One day on the beach is enough for me to feel that I love the beach so much, where I can come whenever I want, where can receive my sadness, where I can through out my stressful. These beauties will remain engrave in my heart forever.

 

 

MY FAVOURITE SIGHT SEEING

If someone has ever been traveled to Phan Thiet city, make sure that they couldn't skip to go to the beach. I am not exception. The beach is the great place for me relaxing the stressful and fulfills my feeling.

            The first thing I usually do when come here is strolling. When strolling along the beach, my ground feet touch the smooth white sand which seems to be gleam under the thin rays of the sun. It's very lovely sight. The fresh air in here also made me feel more comfortable. Whenever I feel unhappy, I want to sit in the beach, listen to the sound of the wave rolling, enjoy cool breeze of the sea, which can clear my mind and help me to throw out of every problem.

            When I feel tired of walking, I usually want to sit under the line of sea pine. You know, at the beach, sea pines are planted line by line, so they are standing upright as straight as they could. The picture of the sun shine through every line of sea pine is also amazing one. This picture will be very beautiful. At the time I see that sight, I really want to become an artist to capture it in my painting and hand it on my wall then.

            A change from sunset to night is very excited. As the time passed, the sun is almost disappearing behind the horizon. The color of the sky at that time changing a little by little from blue to yellow and then become red. That is sunset. When I watching the sun farer and farer, the sky become darker and darker and people on the beach also fewer and fewer, I feel a bit lonely but it has motivation made me still sit there to see the next sight after sunset. Looking above me, I could see dots of star beginning to appeared, one star, two stars and then they become crowded. The bright which is reflection from the stars to the face of the sea is a marvelous bright. It's hard for me to move my eyes to another thing. That makes me feel love the beach more.

One day on the beach was enough for me to feel that I love the beach so much. Where I can come whenever I want, where can receive all of my sadness, where I can through out my stressful and certainly these beauties will remain engrave in my heart forever.