opinion essay

Outline:                               STUDENT'S LOVE

·                          Introduction: Should student love or not? That's always a common question among students worldwide. As the time pass, nowadays love in college is a trend. Love is a natural feeling of people especially the person in higher education. There were many different thought about that. Someone agree and someone against with student's love. According to me, I agree.

·                          Body: 2 reason make me agree

o       First : The marvel of love

§         Encourage us try to find out the better behavior

§         This is a motivation for us to learn better

o       Second: We can know what is understanding and sharing.

§         When in love, student easily sharing with each other memorable moment in their life.

§         Understand what we need to do to avoid the disagree ideas of people around us.

§         From that: we must to learn more, must to behave well to live better

§         Especially things is: we always have our lover beside whenever we need.

o       Counter argument:

-                          Someone said that: "There was no love college is perfect. Life for a student is study, nothing else."

-                          And some other said: " In life one ca make love anytime as love doesn't  look the time and age as such, but not in college".

o       Refutation:

-                          Agree that: " Nothing is perfect even love." If we agree with these ideas means we agree:

o       When we were a student, we can't love someone in spite of knowing that is our true love,

o       We must control always  our emotion in spite of feeling that our heart  thumps  faster when someone look at ,

o       And we must skip all our change to finding a real love???

ð     very conservative thinking

§         Some facts that: a few of student spend a lot of money and time for their lover =>doesn't concentrate to study => make their study get worse,

-                          however, people shouldn't have a fixed idea with student when they're in love

-                           All of thing depend on us

-                          Should realize what we should do to protect our love => that bad result will never come.

§         Add more idea: some student disagree with love because they afraid of falling.

I think " It's better to fail with pride that to have never tried."

* Conclusion:  In short, I agree that student should be allowed to love in college, it not only to enjoy the marvel of love but also to expect the moving of emotion in our love.

 

 

STUDENT'S LOVE

Should student love or not? That's always a common question among students worldwide. As the time pass, nowadays love in college is a trend. Love is a natural feeling of people especially the person in higher education. There were many different thought about that. Someone agree and someone against with student's love. According to me, I agree.

            There are two reasons make me agree with "student' love" . First, the marvel of love. The love encourage us try to find out the better behavior to replace the old way. It's also a motivation for us to learn better when we have excellent dates. Second, love lets we know what is understanding and sharing with each other. I think when student in love, they can easily  share with each other memorable moment that we can enjoy only in student' life. As I said, in love we'll understand what we need to do to avoid disagree ideas of people around us, this is a big difficulty, but from that we know we much learn more, much encourage each other live better to become perfect dates and to be able to protect our dates. Especially thing is: in love we always have our lover beside whenever we need.

            Even though, there also has some disagree idea with student' love. They said that: " There was no love college is perfect. Life for a student is study, nothing else." And some other said: " In life one can make love anytime as love doesn't  look the time and age as such, but not in college". I am not refuse all of them completely. Nothing is perfect even love. But, if we agree with these ideas means we agree: when we were a student, we can't love someone in spite of knowing that is our true love, we must always control our emotion in spite of feeling that our heart  thumps  faster when someone look at , and we must skip all our change to finding a real love??? That's very conservative thinking. Although there are some facts that: a few of student spend a lot of money and time for their lover, so they doesn't concentrate to study and make their study get worse, people shouldn't have a fixed idea with student when they're in love. All of thing depend on us, if we love and realize what we should do to protect our love, that bad result will never come. Beside that, some student disagree with love because they afraid of falling if that isn't their real love or something like that. But I think " It's better to fail with pride that to have never tried."

In short, I agree that student should be allowed to love in college, it not only to enjoy the marvel of love but also to expect the moving of emotion in our love.