TL is my compatriot. The first thing she attracts me is a friendly smile. I like the way we made friend with each other, it's nearly the same. Both of us are very natural and humorous talking with each other in the same class. Perhaps we both were born and grow up in the same countryside so the characteristic of a simple person make us feel very comfortable when talking together. I hate deceitful person who always try to attract people but the true is not. Similarly, she likes an honest one. We're also having the same style in dress. Both of us like wearing active cloth. Although, our style may be not modern but it fit for us and make us feel confident in front of people. Moreover, one thing makes me wonder, beside the style, the thinking. We also have the same view. In my view, the world is very large so I always try to keep modest and learning. Learn to know how to live better. However, it doesn't mean that: student must learn only. TL and me are both agree that: beside learning we must know how to relax, playing sport, playing music, picnic or est.. are good. But, don't make it too much to concentrate to study. In our view: student who gets the way to balance the life between learning and playing is a very good student.
Two people are difficult to resemble one another perfectly. Therefore, despite these similarities, we have some differences. Unlike most of student think seriously about "Love College" she has a very generous thinking. She said that: love in college is normal, she don't care what people think about her in love. She always appreciates that: love is a very wonderful feeling of heart, why don't we receive it. While she is in love, she still studies very well and nothing to other complaint. Before meeting her, I also look serious about love. Now, I think if we appreciate clearly about love, it can be a motivation for us to study better.
Make friend is the good chance to find out a good friend. Has the same thinking, the view and model in dress, we're easily become a close friend. We respect value of ourselves and learning good thing from each other. All of things for our purpose: live better.
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