the contrast & comparison essay

 

 

LIFESTYLE

Lifestyle is the way we live and work. It's very general and difficult to find out a word or phrase reflects one's lifestyle exactly. I like to be free so I think my lifestyle is in the trend of freedom. When study in university, I met a person who is very interesting _ TL. After the time we meeting, talking and study together I realize that she has many things similar to me such as: thinking, the view and model in dress.

            TL is my compatriot. The first thing she attracts me is a friendly smile. I like the way we made friend with each other, it's nearly the same. Both of us are very natural and humorous talking with each other in the same class. Perhaps we both were born and grow up in the same countryside so the characteristic of a simple person make us feel very comfortable when talking together. I hate deceitful person who always try to attract people but the true is not. Similarly, she likes an honest one. We're also having the same style in dress. Both of us like wearing active cloth. Although, our style may be not modern but it fit for us and make us feel confident in front of people. Moreover, one thing makes me wonder, beside the style, the thinking. We also have the same view. In my view, the world is very large so I always try to keep modest and learning. Learn to know how to live better. However, it doesn't mean that: student must learn only. TL and me are both agree that: beside learning we must know how to relax, playing sport, playing music, picnic or est.. are good. But, don't make it too much to concentrate to study. In our view: student who gets the way to balance the life between learning and playing is a very good student.

            Two people are difficult to resemble one another perfectly. Therefore, despite these similarities, we have some differences. Unlike most of student think seriously about "Love College" she has a very generous thinking. She said that: love in college is normal, she don't care what people think about her in love. She always appreciates that: love is a very wonderful feeling of heart, why don't we receive it. While she is in love, she still studies very well and nothing to other complaint. Before meeting her, I also look serious about love. Now, I think if we appreciate clearly about love, it can be a motivation for us to study better.

            Make friend is the good chance to find out a good friend. Has the same thinking, the view and model in dress, we're easily become a close friend. We respect value of ourselves and learning good thing from each other. All of things for our purpose: live better.

           

opinion essay

Outline:                               STUDENT'S LOVE

·                          Introduction: Should student love or not? That's always a common question among students worldwide. As the time pass, nowadays love in college is a trend. Love is a natural feeling of people especially the person in higher education. There were many different thought about that. Someone agree and someone against with student's love. According to me, I agree.

·                          Body: 2 reason make me agree

o       First : The marvel of love

§         Encourage us try to find out the better behavior

§         This is a motivation for us to learn better

o       Second: We can know what is understanding and sharing.

§         When in love, student easily sharing with each other memorable moment in their life.

§         Understand what we need to do to avoid the disagree ideas of people around us.

§         From that: we must to learn more, must to behave well to live better

§         Especially things is: we always have our lover beside whenever we need.

o       Counter argument:

-                          Someone said that: "There was no love college is perfect. Life for a student is study, nothing else."

-                          And some other said: " In life one ca make love anytime as love doesn't  look the time and age as such, but not in college".

o       Refutation:

-                          Agree that: " Nothing is perfect even love." If we agree with these ideas means we agree:

o       When we were a student, we can't love someone in spite of knowing that is our true love,

o       We must control always  our emotion in spite of feeling that our heart  thumps  faster when someone look at ,

o       And we must skip all our change to finding a real love???

ð     very conservative thinking

§         Some facts that: a few of student spend a lot of money and time for their lover =>doesn't concentrate to study => make their study get worse,

-                          however, people shouldn't have a fixed idea with student when they're in love

-                           All of thing depend on us

-                          Should realize what we should do to protect our love => that bad result will never come.

§         Add more idea: some student disagree with love because they afraid of falling.

I think " It's better to fail with pride that to have never tried."

* Conclusion:  In short, I agree that student should be allowed to love in college, it not only to enjoy the marvel of love but also to expect the moving of emotion in our love.

 

 

STUDENT'S LOVE

Should student love or not? That's always a common question among students worldwide. As the time pass, nowadays love in college is a trend. Love is a natural feeling of people especially the person in higher education. There were many different thought about that. Someone agree and someone against with student's love. According to me, I agree.

            There are two reasons make me agree with "student' love" . First, the marvel of love. The love encourage us try to find out the better behavior to replace the old way. It's also a motivation for us to learn better when we have excellent dates. Second, love lets we know what is understanding and sharing with each other. I think when student in love, they can easily  share with each other memorable moment that we can enjoy only in student' life. As I said, in love we'll understand what we need to do to avoid disagree ideas of people around us, this is a big difficulty, but from that we know we much learn more, much encourage each other live better to become perfect dates and to be able to protect our dates. Especially thing is: in love we always have our lover beside whenever we need.

            Even though, there also has some disagree idea with student' love. They said that: " There was no love college is perfect. Life for a student is study, nothing else." And some other said: " In life one can make love anytime as love doesn't  look the time and age as such, but not in college". I am not refuse all of them completely. Nothing is perfect even love. But, if we agree with these ideas means we agree: when we were a student, we can't love someone in spite of knowing that is our true love, we must always control our emotion in spite of feeling that our heart  thumps  faster when someone look at , and we must skip all our change to finding a real love??? That's very conservative thinking. Although there are some facts that: a few of student spend a lot of money and time for their lover, so they doesn't concentrate to study and make their study get worse, people shouldn't have a fixed idea with student when they're in love. All of thing depend on us, if we love and realize what we should do to protect our love, that bad result will never come. Beside that, some student disagree with love because they afraid of falling if that isn't their real love or something like that. But I think " It's better to fail with pride that to have never tried."

In short, I agree that student should be allowed to love in college, it not only to enjoy the marvel of love but also to expect the moving of emotion in our love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

           

 

 

 

 

the meaningful lesson

THE MEANINGFUL LESSON

 

Everyone need to have a good education as soon as  we were a child. We're go to school not only to learn about knowledge but also to learn how to treat to everyone. I know that when I was at grate 6. I can't forget that experience_ the meaningful lesson for me.

One day, my teacher came to class, instead of teaching us the lesson in the book, she gave us a game. Each of us has a paper sheet so that we can wrote down the things what we hate in this. Teacher said that we will have a very interesting game after we finish this paper sheet. So, we wrote down as fast as we could. it seem that everyone were willing to wrote it, because of a lot unpleasant things in life. While we were writing, teacher only look at us and smiling_ a very warm smile. When I saw her smile, I naturally love her so much. I didn't want to write  down what I hate anymore. I thought that  if she ask me to write what I love, I'll  write her name on paper. After 15 minutes, we collected paper and gave back to teacher. When she received all of sheet, she opened and read one by one for us to listen. It has many many things that we hate. Thanh wrote:" I hate my dad because he always shouted at me". Sang wrote ;" I hate Mai because she usually borrow my toy but never pay back for me" … many opinion like that. She continued to opening and reading until the end one. Everybody doesn't know what her action mean? When my teacher read all completed, she smile and said to us: " now, I knew what each of you hate, It made me  happy because I felt more close to you", then she wrote down what she hates " I hate the time when I got hot temperate and made my student sad ". All class were nearly cried when she read it. At that time, no one could understand the game of teacher and wonder "what happen next " but we knew that we all love her more. Then, teacher lead us  went out followed her to a free space near my classroom. She made a hole  and then throw all of paper which we wrote and covered it by soil. She said in front of everyone :" all of things we hate make us feel very uncomfortable, why don't we throw it away and received lot of new beautiful things from the other? Learn the way how to forgive make our life more beautiful. Are you agree with me?" all words she say were persuasive to us. And that was a very meaningful lesson for me.

In the end we knew that teacher didn't give us any game, just a very interesting lesson. I'll never forget.

descriptive essay

 

 

 

 

 

Out line: MY FAVOURITE SIGHT SEEING

• Thesis statement: I love the beach which is the great place for me relaxing the stressful and fulfills the feeling.
• Body paragraph: 

* Paragraph 1:

-         Topic sentence: The first thing I usually do when come here is strolling.

-         Supporting: when strolling:

§  My ground feet touch the smooth white sand which gleams under the thin rays of the sun.

§  The fresh air make me feel more comfortable

§  I can sitting on the beach to listen to the sound of the wave

§  Enjoy the cool breeze

-         Concluding: It can clear my mind and help me throw out of every problem when I feel unhappy

* Paragraph 2:

-         Topic sentence: The picture of sun shine through every line of sea pine also is amazing one.

-         Supporting :

§  Sea pines are planted line by line

§  They're standing upright as straight as they could

* Paragraph 3:

-         Topic sentence: A change from sunset to night is very excited.

-         Supporting:

§  The sun is almost disappearing behind the horizon.

§  Color of the sky changing a little from blue to yellow and then become red.

§  Wanted to see the next sight after sunset: the night sky.

§  I see the dots of star beginning to appear.

§  The bright reflection from the star to a face of sea is a marvelous bright.

§  Hard to move my eyes from that sight

 * Conclusion:  One day on the beach is enough for me to feel that I love the beach so much, where I can come whenever I want, where can receive my sadness, where I can through out my stressful. These beauties will remain engrave in my heart forever.

 

 

MY FAVOURITE SIGHT SEEING

If someone has ever been traveled to Phan Thiet city, make sure that they couldn't skip to go to the beach. I am not exception. The beach is the great place for me relaxing the stressful and fulfills my feeling.

            The first thing I usually do when come here is strolling. When strolling along the beach, my ground feet touch the smooth white sand which seems to be gleam under the thin rays of the sun. It's very lovely sight. The fresh air in here also made me feel more comfortable. Whenever I feel unhappy, I want to sit in the beach, listen to the sound of the wave rolling, enjoy cool breeze of the sea, which can clear my mind and help me to throw out of every problem.

            When I feel tired of walking, I usually want to sit under the line of sea pine. You know, at the beach, sea pines are planted line by line, so they are standing upright as straight as they could. The picture of the sun shine through every line of sea pine is also amazing one. This picture will be very beautiful. At the time I see that sight, I really want to become an artist to capture it in my painting and hand it on my wall then.

            A change from sunset to night is very excited. As the time passed, the sun is almost disappearing behind the horizon. The color of the sky at that time changing a little by little from blue to yellow and then become red. That is sunset. When I watching the sun farer and farer, the sky become darker and darker and people on the beach also fewer and fewer, I feel a bit lonely but it has motivation made me still sit there to see the next sight after sunset. Looking above me, I could see dots of star beginning to appeared, one star, two stars and then they become crowded. The bright which is reflection from the stars to the face of the sea is a marvelous bright. It's hard for me to move my eyes to another thing. That makes me feel love the beach more.

One day on the beach was enough for me to feel that I love the beach so much. Where I can come whenever I want, where can receive all of my sadness, where I can through out my stressful and certainly these beauties will remain engrave in my heart forever.

 

 

Thinking about happy life

Outline: THINKING ABOUT HAPPY LIFE

* Thesis statement: Happy life is that you can live with what you want.

* Paragraph 1:

Topic sentence: Thinking about the difference between the rich and the poor

Controlling: * The rich:

- It’s said that: only the rich have a happy life but it not true

- Many rich people aren’t happy with their life: no health or their Mind isn’t peaceful

- Money can make the rich become to unkind person

· The poor:

- Don’t have a lot of money but have good health

- When they have peace of mind they can to everything.

- The poor become the rich isn’t impossible

* Paragraph 2:

Topic sentence: Live with what we want is happy.

Controlling:

- Content with wealth and health we have

- Lead them to be a happy and peaceful life

- Be ourselves to do everything

* Concluding: No thing is impossible. We needn’t mind about rich or poor. Do everything we want will make our life happy.

THINKING ABOUT HAPPY LIFE

Have you ever thought about “How is happy life you want to live”? Many people believe that happy life often linked with wealth. Because, only the rich have plenty of money, the poor are not. But it not true perfectly. In my idea, I think happy life is that you can live with what you want.

First, I think about the different between the rich and the poor .It’s said that: only the rich have a happy life, the poor are not. It isn’t true because there are many rich people who are not happy with their life. They may have no healthy or their mind is not peaceful. Moreover, money can make the rich become unkind person. Because, when they have a lot of money, they always want to have more and more. The millionaire doesn’t think his wealth is sufficient. It’s very hard for them to stop their desire to earn more money. Beside that, some rich people are always worried about their health. They have to pay a great deal of money for hospital and drug to take care their health. But they’re not only hasn’t good health but also get more anxious about dead. Many students were born and grow up in rich family but they aren’t feeling happy because of dependence. On the contrary, the poor also can live in a happy life, that’s possible. They weren’t born in rich family, they don’t have a lot of money, but if they have good health, have peace of mind and they try to work to earn more money for their life, the poor become the rich isn’t impossible.

Thus, in my mind, if we can live with what we want_ it’s happy. That’s mean: we must content with wealth and health we have, and then pay attention to lead it to be a happy and peaceful life. Do everything what you want such as: read book to widen knowledge, find out new things that we want to discover….. Sometimes, the ideas of many other people around us may make us lose balance, lose way in our mind. Therefore, one of the most important things is: we must be ourselves to do everything.

No one has a happy life naturally, it depend on one’s mind. When we realize what we want to do and how to make them become a peaceful life, it’s wonderful to make our happy life. No thing is impossible.

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THE LARGE WORLD AROUND ME

When i was a young girl, I always thought that my family is a big
world. I live in there and all of my life will be in there where my
parent,my brother and i live happy together. All things were seem
perfect to me. I was taken good care of by my parent and play with my
brother very excited. That is the time when I was in primary school. i
was only went to school and come back home.That's all.I never think I
can live far away from home. but when I study at high school and now
in university. the more I learn the more i know that the world around
me is very large and has a lots of new things I must learn.

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